
Well, here we are at the last episode of Ameranth & Ash to be posted. I say last to be posted because, as you'll notice when you read it, this is not the end of the story by any means. But this rough first draft becomes even more rough, fragmented and sparse after this, so, this seemed like the best place to stop, not to mention that posting only part of the story here improves my chances as I seek publication for the finished product. And, since my first-choice publisher wants the story off of here when they consider it, I will be taking down all of the Ameranth & Ash episodes next Friday (Nov. 13).
I want to thank everyone who's followed A&A through this little experiment. Putting unedited first draft material up online was nerve-wracking at times. (Especially that opening scene. Oy! I can't tell you how many times I wanted to sneak online in the dead of night and take that down.) But overall, I found this to be a wonderful way to produce a first draft. Your suport has really kept me motivated, and I think I'm going to stay motivated through the second draft, because already I'm eager to get this story polished and published so I can share with you how it all comes out.
If you happen to be just tuning in, here's the rundown:
Ameranth is a vasai, born with both male and female characteristics,
and the ability to heal. Ash is a chel, a member of the underclass. Ash
gets caught where he's not supposed to be and is brutally punished for
it, but when Ameranth brings him to his home and heals him, that is
really breaking all the rules. What begins as an act of compassion
grows into a bond of love and ignites sparks that could set Ameranth
and Ash's whole world on fire.
Please note: The Ameranth & Ash segments posted here are from a
work in progress. They are entirely raw, with author's notes, missing
names,
different versions of the same paragraph, and all manner of grisly
error. They also include explicit, non-heteronormative sex, and graphic
violence. And you should know that I will not post the whole story in
its entirety. At some point I will stop and pull the existing excerpts
in preparation for submitting the work to a publisher. (Update: All Ameranth & Ash episodes will come down next Friday, 11/13/9.) And now, if I
haven't driven you away yet, ;) enjoy!
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